Step in setting up my own
"Cosmetic Surgery Business"
(5 Paragraph)
BY: Miss yenruedee nithuram
The saying, “fine features make fine birds” yet for all ages. Especially at this time, the lifestyle and activities of the people is contact with the outside people even more including social contact and business contacts as well. Appearance of body is shape, face; skin and good personality that will increase self confident. Therefore, every ages, gender, teenager, or adult are interested and used beauty business service more and more that start from head to toe such as to make a nail, hair, massage, acne care, and skin care treatment.In 2010,market value of cosmetic surgery and beauty,17-18 percent.It is about11,000 million baht.For the beauty market in 2011 would be at 20,000 million baht and it is expected to grow 20% in 2012.In 2012.cosmetic surgery business became to number one of all businesses.This expected it to be the most grew business. So, I decided to set up cosmetic surgery business because it is very popular and tend to growing continue. I have to prepare three things to set up this business.
Firstly, investment, because this kind of business to invest several parts such as human resources, building, products, and technologies. It must to have more money. So, I am going to bank loans about 5 millions. I plan to pay the bank within three years.
Secondly, human resources, I will hire 2 experts .One man can do all things of cosmetic surgery ,for example, double eyelid, Breast augmentation, nose surgery, Chin -augmentation,sharpening the jaw and liposuction etc. In addition, I will hire 6 assistants of experts and 8 general staff such as 2receptionist,1 house keeping,1 security,2 accountants,1maketing , 1public relations. I will get quality and good staff only. That all for perfect business in the future.
Finally, products, this kind of business must to use several materials that depends on kind of surgery .For example, nose surgery, it have 2 kinds of silicones are instant silicone and silicone bar. Breast augmentation, it have 3 kinds of silicones are salt’s bag implant, silicone gel implant, andbecker’s gel implant. Liposuction, it have 3 kinds of equipments are water jet liposuction, laser, and ultrasonic liposuction. All products are different prices and different quality. Depending on what customer wants and type of surgery?
In summary, the cosmetic surgery business is interestingbecause everybody back to care health more and more. Especially, the beauty of the skin, face and shape. Even who is beautiful, who want more. These factors that make the business grow continue. In addition, businesses will need to adjust their marketing strategies to differentiate from other competitors such as innovation of services and advertising through various media for our business will be well-known. As well as providing a good service. So that consumers were impressed by the service at all times.
Cosmetic surgery: Draft 1
Cosmetic surgery is defined as ‘Surgery that modifies or improves the appearance of a physical feature, irregularity, or defect’ (dictionary.com, 2012).Thus it is a way to help a normal woman to become a pretty lady. As me, I am one that looks normal. If I have a chance to surgery, I will make double eyelid .There are three reasons why I want to have double eyelid surgery.
Firstly, for self confident, I am single eyelid and small eye. My opinions are single eyelid is not beautiful and it seems to sleep. I like double eyelid very much because it looks big eyes, beautiful eyes and it looks like a doll. I think, if I have double eyelid, I will have a confident more and more. So, I can do many things is good because I am a beautiful girl.
Secondly, for career, I do not know in the future what I will be? My dreams are receptionist or public relations. I think if I will be that, the beautiful is important because these jobs must to always meet with many people. Beautiful on face can give the impression for them.
Finally, for love life, guys and girl are mostly attracted by good looking people. It is a natural sense. The people like beautiful things include human as well. The people do not like ugly. They like to look handsome, cool, pretty and beautiful because these physical features have affected the mind is happiness, cheerfulness and feel good .When people receive these things. It leads to have a chance to get married.
Therefore, cosmetic surgery is a good one way to make dreams of many people will come true.
The medical receptionist: Draft 1
The medical receptionist handles several responsibilities such as answer the telephone calls and schedule patient's appointment. Working of medical receptionist has many roles like general officer that they work in many places such as the standard office hours and shifts worked. In addition, it requires various type of knowledge and skills. So, there are no specific requirement required because it depends on the type of the medical receptionist.
The medical receptionist: Draft 2
" The medical receptionist handles several responsibilities such as..."
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" answer the telephone calls and schedule patient's appointment..."
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" A medical receptionist has many roles and works in many places "
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"...work in many places such as the standard office hours and shifts worked."
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"In addition, it requires various type of knowledge and skills. So, there are no specific requirement required because it depends on the type of the medical receptionist."
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Working of medical receptionist has many roles like general officer that they work in many places such as the standard office hours and shifts worked.
-A medical receptionist has many roles like general officer. However thy have to work in the standard office hours and on shifts worked.
In addition, it requires various type of knowledge and skills. So, there are no specific requirement required because it depends on the type of the medical receptionist.
-Confusing! Does this job require or not require specific skills?
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