Step in setting up my spa business (Draft 1)
Cosmetic Surgery (Draft 2)
Organic foods (Draft 2)
Organic foods (Draft 1)
Spa
business is just small business during nowadays and has a slight increase of its
growing, while other business, such as restaurant and other private companies
are very fast-growing. On the other hand, I think differently. Today, there are many people interested in
their health, not only inner, but also their outer, so I think it would be a
good chance for me to set up a spa business.
First
step, I plan that after I graduate, I will save my money for my own spa
business. I think it would be about 2 years for collecting enough money to set
up the shop. Before that I think I have to work hard to get more money while I learn
how to set up and manage spa business. I think true knowledge about spa
business is the best way to manage this business.
Second
step, There are different kinds of spas like the day
spas where the person has to make an appointment and get treated. Resort spas
are like staying in a hotel, spas on cruise ships as one of the relaxing ways,
medical spas which are run by medical practitioners to treat patients, home
spas for daily indulgence in homes etc. The spa treatments include facials,
massages, sauna and other skin and body treatments like pedicure, manicure etc.
Some spas are dedicated to particular health aspects like weight loss regime or
for back pain treatment. I will do a
market research which type of spa would suitable my clients’ need and where the
best location for my shop is. The result of market research will lead to the
type of my spa business.
Last
step, after I set up my business, I will benchmarking with my competitors and improve
my own shop to make a competitive edge among my competitors. Although, the rate
of price is important for some people in their decision if they will take or
not take our service, I think identity and quality is as important as it too. I
think first impression is very important for my business, because, maintain regular customer is easier than find new
customers.
In
conclusion, there are many people who start paying more attention on their
health, not only on their food, but also their appearance. Spa might
suit their needs, because it is including too much good benefits. For example, enhancing spiritual awareness,
increasing the body’s energy flow, improving flexibility of our body, reducing
high blood pressure, hypertension and the effects of ageing, healing emotional
distress, soothing our tired muscles, toning and nourishing the skin, detoxifying
our body, stimulating circulation, reducing weight and weight-related problems
and reducing insomnia, stress and fatigue. Therefore,
this might be my great opportunity to set up the spa business.
Cosmetic Surgery (Draft 2)
According
to Longman Dictionary, a cosmetic surgery or best-known as a kind of plastic
surgery is the surgical specialty or procedure concerned with the restoration,
construction, reconstruction, or improvement in the form, function, and
appearance of body structures that are missing, defective, damaged, or
misshapen. I believe that everybody likes to be a good-looking. I am one of that,
but I am not that lucky. So, these are two reasons why I want to have a
Cosmetic surgery.
For self-esteem, have you imagined how much you
would be proud if everyone’s looking at you wherever you go or whatever you do?
In fact, everyone wants to be praised and recognized. Having a good looking
with pleasing personality leads people having self-confidence. Then, when
people are full of confident, they’ll have a will power to create and develop
many useful things for the society. In addition, for the love life, what is
your first thing you consider when you looking for your couple? Is it true that
the inner is more important than the outer? For me, the outer is as important
as the inner. The more beautiful you are, the more choices you have, and the
less disappointment in love you got.
In conclusion,
cosmetic surgery is important for such a person who don't have such a good
luck. This is not mean doing or having a surgery is the best choice, but it’s
just the easiest way to prove ourselves. Some people may place important on the
inner, however, the outer is as important as the inner at all.
Cosmetic Surgery (Draft 1)
A Cosmetic
surgery or best-known as a kind of plastic surgery is the
surgical specialty or procedure concerned with the restoration, construction,
reconstruction, or improvement in the form, function, and appearance of body
structures that are missing, defective, damaged, or misshapen. I believe
that everybody likes to be a good-looking person. I am the one of that too, but
I am not that lucky, so, these are two reasons why I want to have a Cosmetic
surgery.
First, for self esteem, have you
imagined how much you would be proud if everyone’s looking at you wherever you
go or whatever you do. In fact, everyone likes to be praised and recognized. Having
a good looking with pleasing personality leads people having a self
confident. Then, when people are full of
confident, they’ll have a will power to create and develop many useful things
for the society.
Finally, for the love life, what
is your first thing you consider when you looking for your couple. Is it true
that the inner is more important than the outer? For me, the outer is as
important as the inner. The more beautiful will get more choices and less disappointment
in love life. Therefore, Cosmetic surgery is important for the one who is not
lucky as me.
Organic foods (Draft 2)
There
are three reasons why people should eat organic foods. First, organic foods are
good for health. It provides a lot of benefit for health because it is free
from toxic. Besides, it also contains a lot of vitamin C, minerals and
antioxidant, which helps to prevent people from cancer, Alzheimer, obesity and
some birth defects. Second, organic foods are good for human both for consumers
and farmers. In organic foods processing, farmers use cover crops, fertilizer,
and biologically based soil amendments. This method can produce healthy and
insect resistant plants instead of using chemicals which may cause bad affect
for farmers. Furthermore, organic foods have no GMO (Genetically Modified
Organisms) which may cause effect for human. Finally, organic foods are good
for the environment. Organic method is natural friendly, because there’s no insecticide
which may ruin soil, water and living things. Moreover, organic methods can
reduce greenhouse effect and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, because the
farmers use natural method in every growing process. Therefore, the organic
foods are the best choice for the consumers.
Organic foods (Draft 1)
There are three reasons why people should eat organic foods.
First, organic foods are good for health. It provides a lot of benefit for
health not only non-chemically from natural grow, that means excluding the use
of the insecticide, preservation and food additive
inputs, but also more nutritional than non-organic. It contains a lot of
vitamin C, minerals and antioxidant which helps to prevent people from cancer, Alzheimer,
obesity and some birth defects. Second, organic foods are good for human both for
consumers and farmers. In organic foods processing, farmers use cover crops, fertilizer, and biologically based soil
amendments. This method can produce healthy and insect resistant plants
instead of using chemicals which may cause bad affect for farmers. Furthermore,
organic foods have no GMO (Genetically Modified Organisms) which may cause
effect for human. Finally, organic foods are good for the environment. Organic
method is natural friendly, because there’s no insecticide which may ruin soil,
water and living things. Moreover, organic methods can reduce greenhouse effect
and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, because the farmers use natural method in
every growing process. Therefore, the organic foods are the best choice for the
consumers.
References:
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The medical receptionist (Draft 2)
The medical receptionist is the first person associating with clients and organizing the contact between doctors and patients. She/he handles several responsibilities and has many types of roles. The main duties are answering the telephone calls, scheduling patient’s appointments and doing basic office work. This type of career works in medical industry. For example, a physician’s office, hospitals and private health care providers on both standard office hours and on shifts. Various types of knowledge and skills are required, such as telephoning and computer skill. In fact, there are no specific requirements, because it depends on the type of a medical receptionist. Therefore, a medical receptionist is important for the medical industry because it is the key of an effective communication between doctors and patients.
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The medical receptionist (Draft 1)
The
medical receptionist handles several responsibilities and has many
types of roles. The main duties are answering the telephone calls and
scheduling patient’s appointments. This type of career works in many
places both on standard office hours and on shifts. Various types of
knowledge and skills are required. In fact, there are no specific
requirements because it depends on the type of a medical receptionist.
The medical receptionist handles several responsibilities and has many types of roles.
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