Mr.Kitipong

Step in setting up my spa business (Draft 1)


Spa business is just small business during nowadays and has a slight increase of its growing, while other business, such as restaurant and other private companies are very fast-growing. On the other hand, I think differently.  Today, there are many people interested in their health, not only inner, but also their outer, so I think it would be a good chance for me to set up a spa business.

First step, I plan that after I graduate, I will save my money for my own spa business. I think it would be about 2 years for collecting enough money to set up the shop. Before that I think I have to work hard to get more money while I learn how to set up and manage spa business. I think true knowledge about spa business is the best way to manage this business.   

Second step, There are different kinds of spas like the day spas where the person has to make an appointment and get treated. Resort spas are like staying in a hotel, spas on cruise ships as one of the relaxing ways, medical spas which are run by medical practitioners to treat patients, home spas for daily indulgence in homes etc. The spa treatments include facials, massages, sauna and other skin and body treatments like pedicure, manicure etc. Some spas are dedicated to particular health aspects like weight loss regime or for back pain treatment. I will do a market research which type of spa would suitable my clients’ need and where the best location for my shop is. The result of market research will lead to the type of my spa business.

Last step, after I set up my business, I will benchmarking with my competitors and improve my own shop to make a competitive edge among my competitors. Although, the rate of price is important for some people in their decision if they will take or not take our service, I think identity and quality is as important as it too. I think first impression is very important for my business, because, maintain regular customer is easier than find new customers. 

          In conclusion, there are many people who start paying more attention on their health, not only on their food, but also their appearance. Spa might suit their needs, because it is including too much good benefits. For example, enhancing spiritual awareness, increasing the body’s energy flow, improving flexibility of our body, reducing high blood pressure, hypertension and the effects of ageing, healing emotional distress, soothing our tired muscles, toning and nourishing the skin, detoxifying our body, stimulating circulation, reducing weight and weight-related problems and reducing insomnia, stress and fatigue. Therefore, this might be my great opportunity to set up the spa business.                                  






Cosmetic Surgery (Draft 2)


           According to Longman Dictionary, a cosmetic surgery or best-known as a kind of plastic surgery is the surgical specialty or procedure concerned with the restoration, construction, reconstruction, or improvement in the form, function, and appearance of body structures that are missing, defective, damaged, or misshapen. I believe that everybody likes to be a good-looking. I am one of that, but I am not that lucky. So, these are two reasons why I want to have a Cosmetic surgery.

For self-esteem, have you imagined how much you would be proud if everyone’s looking at you wherever you go or whatever you do? In fact, everyone wants to be praised and recognized. Having a good looking with pleasing personality leads people having self-confidence.  Then, when people are full of confident, they’ll have a will power to create and develop many useful things for the society. In addition, for the love life, what is your first thing you consider when you looking for your couple? Is it true that the inner is more important than the outer? For me, the outer is as important as the inner. The more beautiful you are, the more choices you have, and the less disappointment in love you got.

            In conclusion, cosmetic surgery is important for such a person who don't have such a good luck. This is not mean doing or having a surgery is the best choice, but it’s just the easiest way to prove ourselves. Some people may place important on the inner, however, the outer is as important as the inner at all.



 Cosmetic Surgery (Draft 1)

             A Cosmetic surgery or best-known as a kind of plastic surgery is the surgical specialty or procedure concerned with the restoration, construction, reconstruction, or improvement in the form, function, and appearance of body structures that are missing, defective, damaged, or misshapen. I believe that everybody likes to be a good-looking person. I am the one of that too, but I am not that lucky, so, these are two reasons why I want to have a Cosmetic surgery.
First, for self esteem, have you imagined how much you would be proud if everyone’s looking at you wherever you go or whatever you do. In fact, everyone likes to be praised and recognized. Having a good looking with pleasing personality leads people having a self confident.  Then, when people are full of confident, they’ll have a will power to create and develop many useful things for the society.
Finally, for the love life, what is your first thing you consider when you looking for your couple. Is it true that the inner is more important than the outer? For me, the outer is as important as the inner. The more beautiful will get more choices and less disappointment in love life. Therefore, Cosmetic surgery is important for the one who is not lucky as me.





Organic foods (Draft 2)
 
     There are three reasons why people should eat organic foods. First, organic foods are good for health. It provides a lot of benefit for health because it is free from toxic. Besides, it also contains a lot of vitamin C, minerals and antioxidant, which helps to prevent people from cancer, Alzheimer, obesity and some birth defects. Second, organic foods are good for human both for consumers and farmers. In organic foods processing, farmers use cover crops, fertilizer, and biologically based soil amendments. This method can produce healthy and insect resistant plants instead of using chemicals which may cause bad affect for farmers. Furthermore, organic foods have no GMO (Genetically Modified Organisms) which may cause effect for human. Finally, organic foods are good for the environment. Organic method is natural friendly, because there’s no insecticide which may ruin soil, water and living things. Moreover, organic methods can reduce greenhouse effect and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, because the farmers use natural method in every growing process. Therefore, the organic foods are the best choice for the consumers.  



Organic foods (Draft 1)


There are three reasons why people should eat organic foods. First, organic foods are good for health. It provides a lot of benefit for health not only non-chemically from natural grow, that means excluding the use of the insecticide, preservation and food additive inputs, but also more nutritional than non-organic. It contains a lot of vitamin C, minerals and antioxidant which helps to prevent people from cancer, Alzheimer, obesity and some birth defects. Second, organic foods are good for human both for consumers and farmers. In organic foods processing, farmers use cover crops, fertilizer, and biologically based soil amendments. This method can produce healthy and insect resistant plants instead of using chemicals which may cause bad affect for farmers. Furthermore, organic foods have no GMO (Genetically Modified Organisms) which may cause effect for human. Finally, organic foods are good for the environment. Organic method is natural friendly, because there’s no insecticide which may ruin soil, water and living things. Moreover, organic methods can reduce greenhouse effect and carbon dioxide in the atmosphere, because the farmers use natural method in every growing process. Therefore, the organic foods are the best choice for the consumers.  


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The medical receptionist (Draft 2)

The medical receptionist is the first person associating with clients and organizing the contact between doctors and patients. She/he handles several responsibilities and has many types of roles. The main duties are answering the telephone calls, scheduling patient’s appointments and doing basic office work. This type of career works in medical industry. For example, a physician’s office, hospitals and private health care providers on both standard office hours and on shifts. Various types of knowledge and skills are required, such as telephoning and computer skill. In fact, there are no specific requirements, because it depends on the type of a medical receptionist. Therefore, a medical receptionist is important for the medical industry because it is the key of an effective communication between doctors and patients.


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The medical receptionist (Draft 1)
The medical receptionist handles several responsibilities and has many types of roles. The main duties are answering the telephone calls and scheduling patient’s appointments. This type of career works in many places both on standard office hours and on shifts. Various types of knowledge and skills are required. In fact, there are no specific requirements because it depends on the type of a medical receptionist.


6 comments:

  1. The medical receptionist handles several responsibilities and has many types of roles.
    Comment: This is compound sentence but you should subject follows the coordinative....Miss Yenruedee Nithuram

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  2. Mr.Panuwat RungkaratNovember 4, 2011 at 2:09 PM

    There aren't several type sentenses. There is only 2 sentenses that is simple sentense and complex sentense. The topic is in first sentense and there are main ideas support. Good!!

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  3. I think this is a good work. It's easy to read and understand. However, I'd like you to add the "reconfirming" sentence to your summary.

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  4. Almost perfect! A bit more details will make it more communicative.

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  6. This is important. Could you please help me finish my research by doing this attitude survey?

    Follow this link
    https://docs.google.com/spreadsheet/viewform?formkey=dE04TnBkUHRYUlQzaXpsd05qMDMtb3c6MQ&ifq

    Please tell your group also

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